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1、大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作經(jīng)典范文及點(diǎn)評(píng) 1.大學(xué)生自我創(chuàng)業(yè)已經(jīng)不是一個(gè)新鮮的話題了。那么自我創(chuàng)業(yè)有何利，又有何弊呢?看過本文之后你就知道了?；蛟S這對(duì)面臨畢業(yè)的你還是個(gè)不小的幫助呢! Selfemployment Selfemploymentcouldbringmanyadvantages.Oneoftheadvantagesofbeingself-employedisthattheprofitthebusinessmakesbelongstotheowner.Iftheself-employedperson
2、succeedsinbusiness,hehasthechancetoearnagreatdealofmoney.Theprofitearnedistherewardfortheowner’seffort,abilityandcreativity.Thus,asecondadvantageisthataperson’sintelligenceandabilitieshaveadirecteffectontheearnings.Athirdadvantageofbeingself-employedistha
3、tapersoncancontrolhisworkinghours.Whilenotallself-employedpeoplearecompletelyfree,mostofthemhavemorecontroloverthisareathanthesalariedpeople. However,beingself-employedisnotwithoutproblems.First,beingone’sownbossplacestheresponsibilitydirectlyonthatindiv
4、idualshoulders.Everyonehassomeweaknessesinacertainaspects.Theseweaknesseswillaffecthowsuccessfulaself-employedpersonis.Second,thoughtheself-employedcanearnconsiderableprofitswithasuccessfulbusiness,lossescanforcethemoutofbusinessandsometimes,placetheminde
5、bt.Athirddisadvantageconcernsincomesecurity.Self-employedpeoplehavenoguaranteedwage.Theirearningscanvarygreatly,dependingonbusinessconditions.Salariedpeople,however,cangenerallycountoncontinuedearnings.Inaddition,salariedpeopleoftenenjoyfringebenefitsthat
6、meangreaterpeaceofmind.Oneofthesebenefitsmaybeinsurancepaidforbytheemployerthatcontinuestheemployee’ssalaryintheeventofsicknessoraccidentwhilemanyself-employedpeopledonothavesuchprotection①. [253words] 行文點(diǎn)評(píng) 文章結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單明了。第一段闡述了自我創(chuàng)業(yè)的3個(gè)好處。第二段分析了自我創(chuàng)業(yè)所存在的問題?！ ?/p>
7、段中“first,second,third”的使用，不僅使文章在句式上顯得條理分明，更在內(nèi)容上體現(xiàn)了連貫性?！ ≡~匯斟酌 indebt負(fù)債 counton指望，依靠 fringea.附加的，額外的;邊緣的 佳句臨摹 ?、佟咀⑨尅縤ntheeventofsth萬(wàn)一;倘若 【臨摹】IntheeventofhisdeathSheliawillinheritthemoney.一旦他故去，希拉就會(huì)繼承這筆錢?！ ∷既缛俊 omethingattempted,somethingdone.有嘗試就會(huì)
8、有收獲?！ ctionsspeaklouderthanwords.行動(dòng)勝于語(yǔ)言?！ ∮行┤瞬⒎翘貏e聰明，卻能得到大家的認(rèn)可和支持。我們說這些人有個(gè)人魅力。個(gè)人魅力不僅源于聰明、誠(chéng)實(shí)等優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，還源于與他人交往時(shí)的態(tài)度和技巧。 CommunicatingaSenseofPersonalPower Communicatingasenseofpersonalpowercomesfromabeliefthatyoucanreac
