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1、中考英語作文常見的錯誤清單1.審題錯誤英語書面表達的審題十分重要。審題包括此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息,告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。由于英語書面表達的篇幅很有限,所以要求學(xué)生在寫作時要精心組織材料,緊扣主題。不要產(chǎn)生偏題或者漏掉重要信息等問題。??【例文】：蒙山是山東著名的游覽勝地，一年四季都有其獨特的景色(scene)。尤其春天的景色更加迷人。每當(dāng)春天來臨,青山滴翠,美麗的景色吸引了許多游客前來踏青觀光?？勺罱鼛啄?游人不注意保護環(huán)境,亂扔垃圾,攀折樹枝花草,,點火野餐,致使自然環(huán)境遭到破壞。請你寫篇報道,說明蒙
2、山旅游環(huán)境的變化，號召人們文明旅游，保護生態(tài)環(huán)境?！緦W(xué)生習(xí)作】：MengshanMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShandongProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,especiallyinspring.Whenspringcomes,thedaysgetlongerandlongerandtheweathergetwarmerandwarmer.Treesarebeginningtoturngreen,andallkindsof
3、beautifulflowerscomeout.Everythingbeginstogrow.?Themountainsarecoveredwithalotofgreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butinrecentyears,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvi
4、ronment.Theythrewlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Theydon’tknowthatcleanersworkfrommorningtillnighttosweepawaytherubbishandwastethings.Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someevenmadefiresintheforesttoc
5、ookfood.Howdangerousitwas!Luckily,thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.Greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.Newroadsandnicehotelshavebeenbuilt;treesandflowersareplantedaroundthem.Ihopeallthevisitorscankeeptheideainmindthatweshouldprotecttheenv
6、ironment.【問題分析】：這就是屬于審題不清，文章的中心偏離了主題。文章應(yīng)圍繞蒙山環(huán)境狀況變化以及環(huán)境保護主題展開,與蒙山有關(guān)的春天的景色可以略寫,但不宜用太多的筆墨去描繪春天的風(fēng)景,這樣就會沖淡主題。所以文章的第一段應(yīng)該簡寫。同樣在第二段中也沒有必要去談?wù)撉鍧嵐な侨绾吻謇磉@些垃圾的，也沒有必要談?wù)撔碌馁e館的建設(shè)及修路等情況，第二段的最后一句也應(yīng)去掉，與主題無關(guān)?！揪世摹浚篗engshanMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShandongProvince.Ithasitssp
7、ecialscenesalltheyearround,especiallyinspring.Whenspringcomes,themountainsarecoveredwithalotofgreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butinrecentyears,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontopro
8、tectingtheenvironment.Theythrewlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someev
