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1、第三單元作文基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作之正反觀點(diǎn)對(duì)立型你的班級(jí)對(duì)“是否有必要穿校服”進(jìn)行了辯論，以下是正反兩方所持觀點(diǎn)。意見(jiàn)百分比原因贊同70%是學(xué)校的標(biāo)志；整潔、大方；顯示平等,避免攀比；節(jié)省時(shí)間，專注學(xué)習(xí)；不盲目趕時(shí)髦。不贊同30%顏色呆板沉悶；款式單一；不能滿足時(shí)尚品位，不能彰顯個(gè)性.[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容,寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于“學(xué)生是否有必要穿校服”的短文。?介紹正反兩方觀點(diǎn)；?表達(dá)自己的看法。[寫(xiě)作要求]?只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；?不要逐字逐句翻譯所給信息。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]?句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息完整,篇章連貫。第一：認(rèn)真審題?文體：觀點(diǎn)對(duì)
2、立式議論文?人稱：兼顧第一和第三人稱?時(shí)態(tài)：現(xiàn)在時(shí)或者過(guò)去時(shí)理清寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)：1.議論主題：是否有必要穿校服？2.贊成觀點(diǎn)：支持穿校服理由（1）整潔、大方；顯示平等,避免攀比。理由（2）節(jié)省時(shí)間,專注學(xué)習(xí)；不盲目趕時(shí)髦。3.反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)：反對(duì)穿校服理由（1）顏色呆板沉悶；款式單一。理由(2)不能滿足時(shí)尚品位，不能彰顯個(gè)性。4.我的觀點(diǎn)：支持/反對(duì)穿校服第二：整合信息(翻譯關(guān)鍵詞)?象征symbol?整潔大方tidyandneat?平等，避免攀比equal，avoidbeingcompared?節(jié)省時(shí)間，專注學(xué)習(xí)savetime,c
3、oncentrateonstudy?不趕時(shí)髦won’tfollowfashion顏色呆板沉悶dullandboringcolor款式單一simpleandplainstyle?缺乏個(gè)性lackpersonality?不能滿足時(shí)尚品味can’tsatisfytasteforfashion第三：連詞成句議論主題:是否有必要穿校服Wehadadiscussionabout/onwhetherit’snecessarytoweartheschooluniform./Recently,inourclasstherehasbeenah
4、eateddiscussionabout/onwhetherit’snecessarytoweartheschooluniform.贊成觀點(diǎn)：理由1?Theschooluniformisasymboloftheschool.?Itistidyandneat.?Itmakesstudentsfeelequalandhelpsthemavoidbeingcomparedtoothersabouttheclothes.èTheschooluniform,whichistidyandneat,isasymboloftheschoo
5、l,makesthestudentsfeelequalandhelpsthemavoidbeingcomparedtoothersabouttheclothes.理由2：?Wearingtheschooluniformsavesthestudents’timeonchoosingwhattoweartoschool.?Itmakesthemconcentrateonstudy.?Theywon’tfollowfashion./Theyconsidertofollowfashionisunnecessary.èWearing
6、theschooluniformsavesthestudents’timeonchoosingwhattoweartoschool,andmakesthemconcentrateonstudyandconsidertofollowfashionisunnecessary.反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)：理由1?Thecolorisdullandboring.?Thestyleissimpleandplain.èThecolorisdullandboring,andthestyleissimpleandplain./Thecolorisnoton
7、lydullandboring,butalsothestyleissimpleandplain./Apartfromthedullandboringcolor,thestyleissimpleandplain.理由2：?Itlackspersonality.?Itcan’tsatisfystudent’stasteforfashion.èItlackspersonality,soitcan’tsatisfystudent’stasteforfashion./Itcan’tsatisfystudents’tasteforfa
8、shionbecauseof/duetolackofpersonality.表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)?Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnecessarytoweartheschooluniform./Personally,Iprefertotheweartheschoolun
