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1、雅思考試優(yōu)秀作文范文:是否禁煙?Version122Somepeopleclaimthatusingtobaccohasbroughtseveresocialproblemsandsmokingshouldbebanned.Towhatextentdoyouagreewiththe abovestatement? Introduction(56words) Sincethediscoveryoftobaccorelatedtoanumberofhealthproblems,anincreasingnumberofpeoplehavecalledforprohibitingsmoking
2、.Itisundeniablethatstillaconsiderableamountofsmokersexistinthisworld.Iwouldliketoexaminetheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofsmokingcigarettesasfollowingandthenoffermyownopinion. Body1(95words) Therearesomeadvantagestotakingtobacco.(topicsentence)First,tobaccoindustrycontributesagreatproportionofrevenu
3、etothenation.Extremelyhightaxationimposedontobaccoyieldingandcigarettemanufacturinghasreleasedthefinancialburdenforboththegovernmentandtheindividualtaxpayergenerationbygeneration.Second,thesoothingeffectsofsmokinghasbeenconfirmedbyordinarysmokers;particularlythosewhohavehard-brain-workingjobsareinf
4、avorofit;theyclaimthatsmokingcigarettescanmakethemcalmandstimulatebraincellstoworkmoreefficiently.Finally,cigarettesplayanimportantroleinsocialactivities. Body2(106words) Ontheotherhand,smokingdemonstratesnumerousnegativeeffects.(topicsentence)Initially,nicotinemaybringtakersanumberofdiseases.Sec
5、ond-handsmokingalsodoesharmtoyourhealth.Moreover,hatredfromnon-smokersalwaysgrowagainstsmokershencesomeconflictsarisefrequently.Wethenlookatthestatisticsshowingthatthousandsoffireaccidentsworldwideoccureachyearduetothelitterofnon-extinguishedcigaretteends,nottomentiontherelateddeathsandlosses.Lastb
6、utnotleast,expenseshavetobetakenintoconsideration.Finecigarettesarenotcheap.Ifyougetaddictedtothem,yourdailyamountofcigaretteconsumptionwillincreaseinevitably,emptyingyourpocketmoney. Conclusion(88words) Afterall,sofarnodirectevidencehasbeenprovidedthatsmokingcandefinitelyresultintakers'deathof
7、lungcancer,andthosefireaccidentsaretheresultofcarelessnessorirresponsibilityofthesmokers,nottobaccotobelaidblames.Also,spendingpocketmoneycanneverbeconsideredasafinancialburden.Inaddition,Isuggestmorerestri