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1、作文指導(dǎo)二選材之典型遣詞之精準(zhǔn)一、選取事例方法指導(dǎo)1、選取事例常犯問(wèn)題:(1)、事例不典型,難以恰到好處地闡釋主題(2)、事例典型,但利用事例的角度時(shí)而與主題不符甚至無(wú)關(guān)(3)、所選事例難以用作者現(xiàn)有知識(shí)清楚表達(dá),造成晦澀難懂2、恰當(dāng)選材之要素:(1)、選材首先得典型,然后才追求新穎(平時(shí)要善于積累素材)(2)、切取材料為主題服務(wù)的角度敘述,避免閑話廢話(3)、選材要在自己的表達(dá)能力范圍內(nèi),能有利于展示作者的最佳寫(xiě)作能力和水平二、分析以下文章1.Thereisnosuchthingasafreelunchintheworld,norahitten-to-deathra
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4、morrow’sflowers.(田宇)2.Self-disciplineistheabilitytocontroloneselfnottodoattractivebutharmfulthings.Itiswhatittakesforeverybodytofulfilhisambition.TakeChaiJingforexample.KnownasaCCTVhostess,shemustbeabletomakeherselfrichandsomeofherfellowshavebeenmarriedtowealthypeople,butChaiJingisstill
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6、worthwhiletotakealongtimetolearnit.Maybethatcanbenefitusforever.(馬美琪)3.Thereisnodoubtthattheworldisfilledwithvarietiesoftemptationsanddistraction.Onlybylearningself-disciplinecanwesucceed.TakethefamousauthorYuGuoforexample.Promisingtofinishafictioninhalfayear.YuGuohadplannedtodevotehims
7、elftothetask.However,hewassobusywithhissocialactivitieswithhisfriendseverynightthathepaidlittleattentiontohismission.Seldomdidhehavenovelideasforfiction.Afterafewweeks,hewasworriedaboutthesituation.Thenhedecidedtolearnself-discipline.Thenhelockedhisclothesinthecasesandthrewaway