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1、英語作文講評1、Helpstudentshowtoorganizeacomposition.2、Howtomakecorrectsentences.3、Howtouseconjunctionstomakeyourcompositionmoreperfect.LearningobjectivesandImportantpoints.假如你是心理醫(yī)生Dr.Smith,你收到學(xué)生Cathy的來信。她在信中說自己很喜歡看電視，但父母擔(dān)心影響學(xué)習(xí)不讓她看，她有時和父母爭吵，很煩惱，卻不知道該怎么辦。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給Cathy回信，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。70詞左右。
2、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。解決方法：不要再和父母爭吵；要學(xué)著理解父母；要和父母溝通想法。DearCathy,Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblems._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishe
3、s!Yours,Dr.Smith作文本次作文展評：展評(一)BeginningWellbegunishalfdone.1.Herearesomeadviceforyou.(王子嫣)2.I’msorrytohearthatyouareunhappy.(孫程帥)3.Firstofall,Idon’tthinkyoushouldarguewithyourparents.Youshouldunderstandthembecausetheyhopeyoutohaveagreatfuture.Youshouldsay“sorry”tothem.(徐潔)4.Yo
4、urparentsdon’tletyouwatchTVbecausetheyworryaboutyourstudy.(李麗欣)展評(二)正文1.WatchingTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.(王子嫣)2.Youcanmakemorefriends.(王子嫣)3.Youshouldsaysorrytoyourparentsandtellthemwhatyouthink.(高萍)4.Youshouldlearntounderstandyourparentsanddon’targuewiththemanymore!(林彥汐)5.If
5、youdothat,IthinkyourparentswillletyouwatchTV.(徐潔)展評(三)Wonderfulending1.Youshouldcommunicatewithyourfriendsandlistentoyourparents.Yourparentshopeyouhaveagoodfuture.(景騰)2.Youcantellthemthatyouareundertoomuchpressure.Youneedmoretimeandfreedomtorelaxyourself.(羅世虎)3.Haveagoodtimepl
6、ayingwithyourparents.(孫程帥)4.Ihopeyouwillbehappysoon!(管藝涵)5.Itcanmakeyougetonwellwithyourparents.(孟德嶸)6.Ithinkit’simportanttotalkwithyourparentsaboutyourideas.(徐潔)常見錯誤1.Ithinkyoucan'twatchTVtoomuch.2.Ithinkyoushouldn'targuewiththem.3.Youshouldtalkingwiththem.4.Ihopemyadvicescan
7、helpyou.5.Youshould_______理解yourparents.6.YoulikewatchTV.7.Youparentsdon'tletyouwatchTV.don’tthinkyoucandon’tthinkyoushouldtalkadviceunderstandwatchingYour8.Theywanttoyoucanhaveagoodfuture.9.Haveagoodluckytoyou!10.Don'tupset.11.Youknowyourparentsareloveyou.12.Yourparentsverylo
8、veyou.常見錯誤youtoluckbeupsetloveloveyouverymuch佳文欣賞DearCathy,Th
