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1、學(xué)生雙語報(bào)。輔導(dǎo)測(cè)評(píng)周刊高三湖北專版第十期短文寫作題目：近日《中國青年報(bào)》就“你是否支持嚴(yán)厲的家教”進(jìn)行了問卷調(diào)查，其中55%的調(diào)查對(duì)象表示支持，他們認(rèn)為嚴(yán)厲的家教是保證孩子成長的必要條件；45%的人表示反對(duì)，認(rèn)為嚴(yán)厲的家教剝奪了孩子們的樂趣，給孩子太多的壓力，不利于孩子們的成長。請(qǐng)你就此話題用英語寫一篇文章，描述大家的觀點(diǎn)，發(fā)表自己的意見。注意：1詞數(shù)120左右2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫提示單詞：調(diào)查對(duì)象respondent參考范文：Recently,asurveyon“Doyousupportstrictparenting?”wascarri
2、edoutbytheChinaYouthDaily.55%oftherespondentssupportstrictparenting,becausetheythinkitisnecessaryforparentstohelptheirchildrenfacethefiercecompetitionandputthemonthewaytotheirfuturesuccessthroughstrictparenting.However,45%areagainstit.Theythinkstrictparentingwilldeprivechildreno
3、ffunandbringthemtoomuchstress,whichisobviouslyharmfultothem.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforparentstobestrictwiththeirchildreninsomecases,becausechildrenarenotoldenoughtodistinguishbetweenrightandwrong.Manychildrenhavebeenspoiledorevenhavedonesomethingseriouslywrongbecauseofalackofs
4、trictparenting.Butparentsshouldcommunicatewiththeirchildrenequallyandgently.學(xué)生作文（張?jiān)疲㏑ecently,theChinaYouthDailyhasmadasurveyaboutthegiventopic“whetheryousupportthestrictparenting”.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.55%oftherespondentsholdasupportingattitudetowardsit.Theythi
5、nkthatstrictparentingisakeywhenchildrenaregrowing,whichcanhelpthemgrowhealthily,andsomeofthemsaidwhatchildrenneedisstrictparenting.But45%oftherespondentsholdtheviewthatstrictparentingisthatitnotagoodwaytobringupchildren.Whattheyconsideristhatitcanpreventchildrenfromlookingforthe
6、irinterest,Thechancesthatchildren'spressurewillincreasearethattheirparentsmaybetoostrictwiththem.Asweallknow,itisharmfultochildren'sgrowth,therefore,theydisagreeit.Inmyopinion,strictparentingisnecessary,butweshouldhavealimit好句子1TheChinaYouthDailyhasmadeasurveyaboutwhetheryousupp
7、ortstrictparentingornot.2Thereasonisthattheythinkstrictparentingisgoodforchildrendevelopment.3Thefactisthatitwilldeprivechildren'sinterestandchildrenwillbetiredofthislife.4AsfarasIamconcerned,strictparentingisnecessarytoeducatechildreneffectively.
