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1、中考英語書面表達(dá)常見錯(cuò)誤分析(一)審題錯(cuò)誤要點(diǎn)領(lǐng)悟????與漢語作文一樣,英語書面表達(dá)的審題也十分重要。審題包括此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息,告誡讀者什么(即寫作目的)。由于英語書面表達(dá)的篇幅很有限,所以要求作者在寫作時(shí)要精心組織材料,緊扣主題。?????????????????????????????????信息提示?????太白山是陜西著名的森林游覽勝地。一年四季都有其獨(dú)特的景色(scene)。不過,游覽太白山的最佳時(shí)機(jī)是春天。每當(dāng)春天來臨,青山滴翠,美麗的景色吸引了許多游客前來踏青觀光?？蓭啄昵?游人不注意保護(hù)環(huán)境,亂
2、扔垃圾,攀折樹枝花草,獵殺野鳥,點(diǎn)火野餐,致使環(huán)境一度惡化。請你寫篇報(bào)道,說明太白山旅游環(huán)境的變化。?????????????????????????????習(xí)作實(shí)況????TaibaiMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShaanxiProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.Whenspringcomes,thedaysgetlongerandlongerandtheweatherg
3、etwarmerandwarmer.Treesarebeginningtoturngreen,andflowerscomeout.Everythingbeginstogrow(1).?Themountainsarecoveredwithalotofgreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butafewyearsago,someofthevisi
4、torspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvironment.Theyusedtothrowlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Theydon’tknowthatcleanersworkfrommorningtillnighttosweepawaytherubbishandwastethings(2).Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenk
5、illedbirds.Someevenmadefiresintheforesttocookfood.Howdangerousitwas!Luckilyenough,thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.Greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.Newroadsandnicehotelshavebeenbuilt;treesandflowersareplantedaroundthem.Visitorsareaskedtotak
6、eplasticbagsandputtheirrubbishinthem(3).????????????????????????????精講點(diǎn)撥???(1)這一部分應(yīng)當(dāng)刪掉。文章應(yīng)圍繞太白山景區(qū)的景色和環(huán)境保護(hù)主題展開,與太白山有關(guān)的春景可以略寫,但不宜用太多的筆墨去描繪春天,這不僅加長了篇幅,也沖淡了主題。????(2)這一部分也應(yīng)當(dāng)刪掉。因?yàn)?這里批評了游客亂扔垃圾的不良現(xiàn)象,由于篇幅的限制,沒有必要再去談?wù)撉鍧嵐な侨绾吻謇磉@些垃圾的。????(3)這一部分同樣需要刪掉。根據(jù)上文不難看出,本文主要談?wù)撎咨铰糜螀^(qū)的環(huán)境污染問
7、題,以及政府采取措施后環(huán)境的變化。沒有必要去描述基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的變化?？偠灾?英文作文中,應(yīng)特別注意避免想起什么寫什么,隨意發(fā)揮,淡化主題。精彩例文??????????TaibaiMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShaanxiProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,andspringisthebesttimetovisitit.Whenspringcomes,themountainsarecoveredwithagreatmanygreental
8、ltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butafewyearsago,someofthe
