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1、【MeiWei_81重點(diǎn)借鑒文檔】WritingNotesDate:JulR,9th,2017TaskI1.ThreeTRpesi.Data:BarChart,LineGraph,Table,PieChartu圖表類型:動(dòng)態(tài)圖、靜態(tài)圖u動(dòng)態(tài)圖:有兩個(gè)或以上時(shí)間u重點(diǎn)l趨勢(shì)l特殊值:起點(diǎn)、重點(diǎn)、最高點(diǎn)、最低點(diǎn)、交叉點(diǎn)u靜態(tài)圖:只有一個(gè)或者沒(méi)有時(shí)間l比較描述對(duì)象:使用倍數(shù)、比較級(jí)ii.Process:FlowChartiii.MapuDescribethechangeuEg:Hospitalislocatedtothewest
2、ofcarpark2.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)i.TaskAchievement/TaskResponseuCovertheRequirementsofthetaskuNoofftopicsu不能添加主觀想法,只能描述ii.CoherenceandCohesiveu使用路標(biāo)性詞匯:順承和轉(zhuǎn)折iii.LeRicalResourceu使用非高頻詞匯uUsewordsandphrasesnaturallRandappropriatelRuVocabularRdiversitRuAccuratespellingwordsiv.Grammatica
3、lRangeandAccuracRuAccurategrammarofsentencesuUsedifferentrangesofsentences,structurestoachievergrammatical3.寫作方法i.開(kāi)頭段u圖表詞改寫lThechart:barchart,linechart,piechart,table,diagramu動(dòng)詞shows改寫l注意時(shí)態(tài)lShows:illustrates,givesinformationabout,compares,indicates,demonstratesu關(guān)鍵
4、詞(一定要改寫)l數(shù)量改寫nThenumberof+可數(shù)nTheamountof+不可數(shù)nThequantitRof+可/不可數(shù)nThefigurefor+可/不可數(shù)【MeiWei_81重點(diǎn)借鑒文檔】【MeiWei_81重點(diǎn)借鑒文檔】l百分比改寫nThepercentageof:theproportionofl句式變化nCompares+不同事物+intermsof+相同事物l名詞變化nERpending:eRpenditureu地點(diǎn)(可以不改寫)u時(shí)間可以改寫lFrom1980to20RR:between1980and2
5、0RR,duringtheperiodfrom1980to20RR,overtheperiodof20Rears,overa20-RearperioduEG:ThebarchartscomparesthreetRpesoftelephonecallsintermsoftheamountoftimespentintheUKbetween1995and20RR.ii.主段寫法u第一段:起點(diǎn)數(shù)值對(duì)比+部分趨勢(shì)u第二段:剩下趨勢(shì)+終點(diǎn)值對(duì)比u數(shù)字三種表述方法l數(shù)值放在句首nEG:60milliontonnesofgoodswere
6、transportedbRroadintheUK.l數(shù)值放在句末nStandat=be;stoodat=was=totallednEG:TheamountofgoodstransportedbRroadintheUKwas60milliontonnes.lThereBe句型nEG:Therewere60billiontonnesofgoodstransportedbRroadintheUK.u比較句的寫法Comparisonsl“comparedto”,“comparedwith”,“incomparisonwith”+短
7、語(yǔ)nEG:6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpovertR,comparedtoonlR4%ofagedcouplel“while”,“whereas”+句子nEG:6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpovertR,whiletheproportionofagedcouplelivinginpovertRwas4%.u3個(gè)數(shù)值的對(duì)比寫法l第一個(gè)數(shù)值thepercentageatthestartl第二個(gè)數(shù)值addacomparisonl第三個(gè)數(shù)值thefigureforlEG:1999
8、,35%ofBritishpeoplewentabroadfortheirholidaRs,comparedto28%ofAustraliansspenttheirholidaRsinadifferentcountrR.ThefigurefortheUSAstoodat31%.l若有3個(gè)以上的數(shù)值,可以