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1、【MeiWei_81重點借鑒文檔】WritingNotesDate:JulR,9th,2017TaskI1.ThreeTRpesi.Data:BarChart,LineGraph,Table,PieChartu圖表類型：動態(tài)圖、靜態(tài)圖u動態(tài)圖：有兩個或以上時間u重點l趨勢l特殊值：起點、重點、最高點、最低點、交叉點u靜態(tài)圖：只有一個或者沒有時間l比較描述對象：使用倍數(shù)、比較級ii.Process:FlowChartiii.MapuDescribethechangeuEg:Hospitalislocatedtothewest
2、ofcarpark2.評分標準i.TaskAchievement/TaskResponseuCovertheRequirementsofthetaskuNoofftopicsu不能添加主觀想法，只能描述ii.CoherenceandCohesiveu使用路標性詞匯：順承和轉(zhuǎn)折iii.LeRicalResourceu使用非高頻詞匯uUsewordsandphrasesnaturallRandappropriatelRuVocabularRdiversitRuAccuratespellingwordsiv.Grammatica
3、lRangeandAccuracRuAccurategrammarofsentencesuUsedifferentrangesofsentences,structurestoachievergrammatical3.寫作方法i.開頭段u圖表詞改寫lThechart:barchart,linechart,piechart,table,diagramu動詞shows改寫l注意時態(tài)lShows:illustrates,givesinformationabout,compares,indicates,demonstratesu關鍵
4、詞（一定要改寫）l數(shù)量改寫nThenumberof+可數(shù)nTheamountof+不可數(shù)nThequantitRof+可/不可數(shù)nThefigurefor+可/不可數(shù)【MeiWei_81重點借鑒文檔】【MeiWei_81重點借鑒文檔】l百分比改寫nThepercentageof:theproportionofl句式變化nCompares+不同事物+intermsof+相同事物l名詞變化nERpending:eRpenditureu地點（可以不改寫）u時間可以改寫lFrom1980to20RR:between1980and2
5、0RR,duringtheperiodfrom1980to20RR,overtheperiodof20Rears,overa20-RearperioduEG:ThebarchartscomparesthreetRpesoftelephonecallsintermsoftheamountoftimespentintheUKbetween1995and20RR.ii.主段寫法u第一段:起點數(shù)值對比+部分趨勢u第二段：剩下趨勢+終點值對比u數(shù)字三種表述方法l數(shù)值放在句首nEG:60milliontonnesofgoodswere
6、transportedbRroadintheUK.l數(shù)值放在句末nStandat=be;stoodat=was=totallednEG:TheamountofgoodstransportedbRroadintheUKwas60milliontonnes.lThereBe句型nEG:Therewere60billiontonnesofgoodstransportedbRroadintheUK.u比較句的寫法Comparisonsl“comparedto”,“comparedwith”,“incomparisonwith”+短
7、語nEG:6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpovertR,comparedtoonlR4%ofagedcouplel“while”,“whereas”+句子nEG：6%ofsingleagedpersonlivedinpovertR,whiletheproportionofagedcouplelivinginpovertRwas4%.u3個數(shù)值的對比寫法l第一個數(shù)值thepercentageatthestartl第二個數(shù)值addacomparisonl第三個數(shù)值thefigureforlEG:1999
8、,35%ofBritishpeoplewentabroadfortheirholidaRs,comparedto28%ofAustraliansspenttheirholidaRsinadifferentcountrR.ThefigurefortheUSAstoodat31%.l若有3個以上的數(shù)值，可以
