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1、簡(jiǎn)單句不簡(jiǎn)單 筆者多次參加過(guò)高考作文評(píng)卷工作,在評(píng)卷的過(guò)程中,發(fā)現(xiàn)許多考生在表達(dá)方面用了較多的簡(jiǎn)單句,句型單調(diào),缺乏連貫,毫無(wú)亮點(diǎn)。當(dāng)然,至于運(yùn)用什么樣的句式,我們建議考生要量力而行。其實(shí),只要考生在平時(shí)稍加留意,在熟練掌握簡(jiǎn)單句的基礎(chǔ)上,巧妙地將同位語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、分詞短語(yǔ)等融入其中,不但可以豐富表達(dá),也令內(nèi)容精彩迭出,從而讓簡(jiǎn)單句不再“簡(jiǎn)單”。以下是讓簡(jiǎn)單句變“高級(jí)”的常用手段: 1.將同位語(yǔ)嵌入簡(jiǎn)單句中 同位語(yǔ)的功能是對(duì)前面的名詞或代詞進(jìn)行解釋說(shuō)明。可用同位語(yǔ)來(lái)合并兩個(gè)相關(guān)的簡(jiǎn)單句,讓句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單明了。如: LiMingisourmonitor.Hei
2、shelpfulaswellasresponsible. →LiMing,ourmonitor,ishelpfulaswellasresponsible. 同時(shí),含有定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句,其實(shí)用含有同位語(yǔ)的簡(jiǎn)單句來(lái)表達(dá),更簡(jiǎn)潔。如: TheotherdayImetTom,whoismyformerclassmate. →TheotherdayImetTom,myformerclassmate. 2.將介詞短語(yǔ)巧置簡(jiǎn)單句句首 Theboyishonestaswellasmodest. →Apartfrombeinghonest,theboyismodest
3、aswell.10 TheychosetogooutshoppingratherthanstayathomewatchingTV. →RatherthanstayathomewatchingTV,theychosetogooutshopping. Wehavesomuchworktocomplete.Wecan’trelaxourselvesthisweekend. →Withsomuchworktocomplete,wecan’trelaxourselvesthisweekend. 3.將分詞短語(yǔ)揉入簡(jiǎn)單句中 Hewaslostinthought.H
4、enearlybumpedintoawallinfrontofhim. →Lostinthought,henearlybumpedintoawallinfrontofhim. Sheburiedherselfinanamusingbook.Shewasunawareofwhatwashappeningaroundher. →Buryingherselfinanamusingbook,shewasunawareofwhatwashappeningaroundher. →Buriedinanamusingbook,shewasunawareofwhatwash
5、appeningaroundher. 4.將形容詞(短語(yǔ))插入簡(jiǎn)單句中 形容詞(短語(yǔ))置于句首,可以充當(dāng)原因狀語(yǔ)。如: Thespeakerwasnervous.Hewasunabletoutterawordonthe10stage. →Nervous,thespeakerwasunabletoutterawordonthestage. 此外,形容詞(短語(yǔ))還可以充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ),往往置于句末,用以補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)的狀態(tài)(注:也有人認(rèn)為形容詞在此充當(dāng)伴隨狀語(yǔ))。如: Theyarrivedhomelate.Theyweretiredandhungry. →
6、Theyarrivedhomelate,tiredandhungry. 5.將插入語(yǔ)融入簡(jiǎn)單句中 有時(shí),為了強(qiáng)調(diào)說(shuō)話者的態(tài)度,可使用插入語(yǔ)。插入語(yǔ)可以是一個(gè)短語(yǔ)或句子,位置也比較靈活。如: Withoutdoubt,ourteamisboundtodefeattheirs. She,Isuppose,iskindofshy. You’reoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool,tobehonestwithyou. 除了上述提到的五種常用的手段外,其實(shí),把簡(jiǎn)單句進(jìn)行以下的“改裝”,同樣可以取得意想不到的效果?! ?.
7、換成感嘆句 Thegraduationceremonyisprettymemorableandunforgettable. →Howmemorableandunforgettablethegraduationceremonyis! Mr.Wangisanextremelyhard-workingandeasy-goingteacher. →Whatahard-workingandeasy-goingteacherMr.Wangis!10 7.妙用倒裝句 Asmallgardenisinfrontofthehouse. →Infrontofthehou
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