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1、巧解高中英語作文中“逗號”和“句號”的使用教學(xué)目標(biāo):1.認(rèn)知“逗號誤用”現(xiàn)象并學(xué)習(xí)修改方法。2.學(xué)習(xí)使用“連句”發(fā)改進“句號過多”的現(xiàn)象。教學(xué)重點:“逗號誤用”的修改,“連句”的方法教學(xué)步驟:一.逗號問題1.“逗號誤用”現(xiàn)象舉例中文與英文的最大區(qū)別,在于中文句子是“意合”的,而英文句子是“形合”的,英語中,獨立的兩句話不能用逗號連接,句子之間必須有連詞相連,構(gòu)成并列句或者復(fù)合句。e.g.Itrainedallnight,theceilingbegantoleak.(F)應(yīng)改為:Itrainedallnight,an
2、dtheceilingbegantoleak.Heworkedharder,finallyhefailedagain.(F)應(yīng)改為:Heworkedharder,butfinallyfailedagain.2?針對“逗號使用”的修改方法可以通過四種方法修改“逗號誤用”的問題:即:逗號變句號逗號變分號句子Z間加連詞變成非謂語動詞e.g.Theexamwaspostponed,theclasswascanceled.考試推遲了,上課取消了。(F)Theexamwaspostponed?Theclasswascancel
3、ed.Theexamwaspostponed;theclasswascanceled?Theexamwaspostponed,sotheclasswascanceled.Theexamwaspostponed,theclasscanceled.1.Exercises:1)Ididn'tgiveup,Istillkeptwriting.(F)可以修改為:a:b:c:止2)WewereinvitedtoMrSmith'slastnight,weenjoyedourselves.(F)可以修改為:a:b:c:d:一.句號
4、問題。有時兩個或更多的句子,如果思想內(nèi)容上關(guān)系很密,我們可以把它們連成一個句子,通過“連句”的方法,是文章意義更加連貫,結(jié)構(gòu)更加緊湊,語言更加生動。“連句”的方法:1.介詞短語法Hedidn'twritetheletterhimself.Heaskedhisfriendtodoit.可以改寫為:Insteadofwritingtheletterhimself,heaskedhisfriendstodoit.1.并列連詞法1).Hehasgivenupsmoking.Nowheislivingahealthylife
5、.可以改寫為:Hehasgivenupsmokingandnowlivingahealthylife.2).Ihadfailedmanytimes.IwasconfidentthatIwouldsucceedintheend.可以改寫為Ihadfailedmanytimes,butIwasconfidentthatIwouldsucceedintheend.2.從屬連詞法1).Somepeoplearehomeless.Weshoulddowhatwecantohelpthem.可以改寫為:Weshoulddowh
6、atwecantohelpthosewhoarehomeless.(運用定語從句)2).Hesuddenlyfellilllastweek.Thismadeussurprised.可以改寫為:Thathesuddenlyfellilllastweekmadeussurprised.(運用名詞性從句)1).Hewassosad.Hedidn'tknowwhattosayorwhattodo.可以改寫為:Hewassosadthathedidn^tknowwhattosayorwhattodo.(運用狀語從句)1.非謂
7、語動詞法1).Mostofthemlaughedatme?Theytoldmeitwasoutofmyreach.可以改寫為:Mostofthemlaughedatme,tellingmeitwasoutofreach.2).Onnationaldayhegotupveryearly.HewantedtowatchraisingnationalflagonTiananmenSquare.可以改寫為:OnnationaldayhegotuptowatchraisingnationalflagonTiananmenSq
8、uare.3).Tomwasaddictedtoplayingcomputergames.Helostinterestinstudy.可以改寫為:Addictedtoplayingcomputergames,Tomlostinterestinstudy.5同位語短語法IamLiMing.IamastudentfromShangshiqiaoSeniorHig